Source A · lines 3 to 12 of Source A
Source AThe slower route
Source A is a travel column written in 2026 by someone who walks the long way from a station to a village.
- 1The route planner described the walk as inefficient. A straight road connected the station to the village; my path made several unexplained detours.
- 2I had chosen it because my phone was nearly flat, which is not the noble reason I later gave my friends.
- 3For the first mile I treated the landscape as an obstacle course. Gates delayed me, mud detained me, and every hill seemed personally opposed.
- 4I kept looking for the village, as though the journey were a mistake that arrival would correct. The lane refused to hurry.
- 5Beside a footbridge, a woman was untangling a dog from its own lead. The dog greeted me with unearned enthusiasm.
- 6She asked whether I knew the way. I admitted that I did not, then discovered that she had meant the dog.
- 7We stood laughing while it performed another complicated circuit around her knees. For the first time that morning, I forgot to check the time.
- 8Beyond the bridge, the path ran beside a wall. On the other side, someone was practising a tune on a trumpet.
- 9The same small passage stumbled, stopped and began again. Without seeing the player, I became absurdly invested in those few notes.
- 10I waited for the tune to escape its difficulty. When it finally did, I moved on, oddly pleased with a success that was not mine.
- 11The village appeared gradually: first a roof, then smoke, then the smell of bread escaping through a propped-open shop door.
- 12On the main road it would have arrived all at once, a name on a sign quickly overtaken. Here it assembled itself at walking speed.
- 13I bought a loaf and sat on a bench whose memorial plaque recorded a woman who had loved this view.
- 14At first I could see nothing remarkable in it. There were some roofs, a parked van and a tree that needed no witness.
- 15Then a curtain moved, a bird occupied the van’s mirror, and the afternoon became specific. I stopped looking for a grander view.
- 16This is not an argument against maps. Anyone who has watched me choose a turning will understand why I still need one.
- 17Nor do I recommend arriving late when someone is waiting. My leisurely experiment depended on having an afternoon I could spend carelessly.
- 18But the efficient route had offered me a destination and quietly removed everything else. Its neatness was also a form of editing.
- 19I reached the village later than planned, with muddy shoes and bread crumbs in my coat. These were not disadvantages I wished to reverse.
- 20When my phone recovered, it congratulated me on reaching my destination. I let it keep its modest understanding of what had happened.
Written for this course. The people and events are invented for practice.
Look again at Source A, lines 3 to 12. Analyse how the writer uses language to present a changing experience of the walk.
a changing experience of the walk